Oh my gosh, I loved it! It was really intriguing and a perfect combination of action, power, and reality. The plot line was really something; after I read a chapter, I felt like I needed to read the next! For someone who doesn't know the Marvel stuff-or any of that superhero set of characters-from the details and characters in your story, I felt that I didn't need to know all that information. And I didn't! Which I really liked because I don't want to watch all the movies and read all those books in order to catch up with your story. All in all, I'm not an editor or anything but in my opinion, your story was very, very enjoyable.