crulgirlzrule
im sending you the edited chapter tonight. I wanted to finish before i left tomorrow (only gone for 4 or so days, horse show) i hope you like it. i didnt really change anything. just spelling, placing, or grammer. =) if you dont like any of thoes (<-) changes i made, switch it back..its your story..lol =) well bye..i have maybe 5 or 10 minutes the im emailing it back =) ican get to my email on my fone if there is anything else you need to send =) bye! ♥ellaz