Justinsegll

Hey there.. Sorry for posting here without permission. I'm a new author, its my first ff. Can you please look at it, and give me feedback, so I can decide whether to continue writing it or stop. It's my first ever story I don't know how good I am.. 
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388402953?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Winsome24

So I just made 2 of my stories private... I personally think I have to do some editing in them but I don't have the time to do so as I'm in 12th grade and have so much school stuff to do and it's almost the end of the school so they are putting a lot of pressure on the students, so I don't get a chance to even write  a chapter in 1 week... My brain is not braining.... So I'll try to republish both of the stories once I'm back in my relaxed life... Till then please enjoy "the Mafia and the idol"... And thank you all for loving this story... I really didn't expect it to be this much successful... TBH i started writing because I was free and didn't have anything to do in the pendamic.. but the love you all have given me is heartwarming... Thank you all for supporting me so much... I'll try to be a better person....
          Thank you
          ~Justinsegll