-chillwildlife-

Hello. I joined Wattpad long ago but I just started writing. So wondering if you could read my story and point out any mistakes if possible.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/281873589?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Danny_christian1234&wp_originator=Tx5javxgPOHn6olzqot2y3fIGAsOAbgOpzKfk79Hf4dc4%2FONL4kl5vybVD1pZ8UmAXDNJoxIA7teb2ieTADBS3mXWb1ObRDDx7l7wWJ8s%2B%2Fy25ihmjsByPr2lYfKmQpk

rb_raven

Hello, my Friend!!
          
            I just wanted to pop by and inform you about my community, "The Foot To Food Community." 
          
           It's a community for everyone who loves to travel and binge food. It's the best way to make new friends from all around the world. With a lot of fun, gossips, games, contests, chatting, and countless amazing projects coming up soon...
          
          We are hiring!!
          
          Whether you want to be a writer, editor, magazine assembler, graphic designer, blogger, interviewer, promoter, awards/contest host, judge, etc. Our doors are open for you!
          
          So, won't you tag along, and join us?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/274659586?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=rb_raven&wp_originator=3wFmv86PUDFCNYY2AUZFSvkdEsE8wLx3%2FqCdsjaQ48d9gmFfTp8DCZKly%2BHjnWzzIEqJK%2FkGZMV8TCbflp2BSbT9yMefVcZdouKwjfAsZrMLobPV4813YgZWYKW5UN%2F1