justjikooking95

heyy!!...can you review my story and give feedback on how's it and where should I improve? :))

https://www.wattpad.com/story/370570555-dawn-of-love-%E2%9D%A4-kth-jk

Newwww storyyyy❤❤
          
          Do check it out❤❤
          I just published "Him" of my story "Men in love". https://www.wattpad.com/1451443218?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=justjikooking95

HELLO GUYS! 
          
          Long time no see. Hope you all are fine and enjoying your life. 
          
          A new story is coming up on Jungkook's birthday. 
          I hope you guys will love it and shower some love to it.❤❤
          
          Thank you❤
          
          Love love ❤❤

Hello dear←⁠(⁠>⁠▽⁠<⁠)⁠ﾉ
          
          Will you please read my jikook book, or maybe vote on it? Your little support will mean a lot to me!! ^^
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/352676156?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=LUCXIRUMOR_07
          
          
          Hope I didn't bother you!
          
          Have a good day or night ahead.(⁠＾⁠∇⁠＾⁠)⁠ﾉ⁠♪

Happyyyy new year everyone ✨✨
          
          
          I hope this year everyone fulfill their dreams and be happy. 
          
          
          We will miss our 7 normal guys this year but don't worry it's just a small time. Army's love is far more than that
          
          
          Love love❤❤
          
          Fighting army ⟬⟭
          

Hello would like to give chance to my book?  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/353711468?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=jikookXbusan_boys&wp_originator=6OZMwLpzzZXz3kJKbxhmGDwCSTGYoWOxQyzrCW0ZyWr7uu3OMpxY6cF0C3z4Ngv9fxVWSi4SGECDYhivY5ZaVx89VhX9FAVIhi4%2BuH90V4v4TcamMmYHAZyFUwtg28oz
          
          
          Thank you ❤

Jimin-shi it's your day sweetheart ❤❤... Hope you get a long life and stay healthy and strong. Eat a lot of food of your choice and enjoy your fullest. ❤✨
          
          And yes we love your teeth the way they are.. No need to change them❤❤
          
          
          HAPPPYYYYY BIRTHDAYYYYYY JIMIN!!❤✨

Hey kid! 
          
          I just came to thank you for reading my book. I barely get reads and yet you decided to read my book. Idk how to thank you for this support. I genuinely am grateful for your lovely time. 
          
          
          Thank you kid. 
          
          
          Maddie:-)❤️