awww honestlyy you should be so proud of yourself because it genuinely never felt like a “first fantasy story” at all. the emotional pacingg, the dialogue, and the tension between theo and calla felt so natursl and immersive the whole time
and omg i’m already excited for your next story now
also, this might be randomm, but may i have an email you’re active on?? i just wanted to passs something to you thatt i think you’d really love, and maybe talk a little more aboutt your story there too✨