justsmilelove08

Happy Janmashstami to all the Indians !!

justsmilelove08

@WingsToThoughts  Hi....... can I just comment on what great timing you have........... read your profile ........ if u don't like studying engineering why are you doing it? your parents are not gonna live the engineer life its you, do you want to be reminded of something you hate everyday? As for writing.... do it out of passion fame will soon follow....... it applies for everything in life......  'LOVE' this one word that I have come to feel very weary of. Here is a little tip - 'love' is just another lesson of life the only thing it can teach you is how one second you feel the best and then next you can be in the dumps. You can say its an illusion . The real love you will feel is with your family...... everything else is just superficial . Now, don't give me crap like I haven't felt love because trust me I  have and it has done nothing but hurt me and the other person. I have loved and still love that person but know that if it isn't meant to be it will not be. Everyday we both hurt ....... because of 'LOVE' .

crazy_5203

Hiya! Could you check out my new story, Her Alpha if you have the time? I would love some feedback! Thanks xox

justsmilelove08

@crazy_5203  Its no probe at all! Keep up the good work !
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crazy_5203

@justsmilelove08 thanks for checking it out :) I'm going to find an editor soon, and my typing can go messy sometimes >_< anyway, thank you so much for trying out my story :D X
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justsmilelove08

@crazy_5203 Hi! There are a few mistakes like - 
            1) when you wrote" We Why don't you believe me" : I think the 'We' isn't meant to be there.......
            2)when you typed - Now they are saying I done it......its grammatically wrong
            3) You typed- I was werewolf ..... It should be- I was a werewolf
             Its a really good book so far.... I like the description a lot ! Just a little editing is need is all! Otherwise I think its gonna be a wonderful book!
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