My name is Jack, like to write, and most of my stories can be placed in the realm of "action/thriller". I'd appreciate any feedback on my current work! Thanks for visiting my page.
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jw5official
Mar 25, 2023 10:14PM
I’d appreciate some feedback on Chapter 4. I can’t tell if it drags the reader through unwanted details or it’s helpful for the reader and is setting the foundation for a rich storyline.Ver todas las conversaciones