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I'm reading Beautiful Disaster and I have realized that it needs actual EDITING and the fact I was writing that book when I was in such a depression mood half of the time and I didn't really plan it (pantser) is crazy. That's why it's so bad and looks like a 12-year-old wrote that shit ESPECIALLY with the overused commas and idk why I kept unnecessarily using those but it looks dumb as hell LMAO. I’ll def edit it because I wanna also publish it so yeah, not so sure anymore.