jyotikays

hey u love to read dark forbidden romantic stories?

Sorry  to post here. 
          I am a new writer if anyone wanted check my story and suggest where can I improve 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/412048967?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Authorrup

Assalamu alaikum! Hoping you are doing well! I am writing an desi enemies to lovers book that has lots of chaos, comedy, romance and a little bit of drama.And I would really appreciate it if you could check out my book and share your precious reviews on it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/358410204?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=fanciful_writes 
          
          
          You can also check out my other book, which revolves around two sworn enemies who were tied to each other because of a business deal hatched by their fathers and then again separated because of their selfish motives. Seven years later, fate makes them cross paths again, but this time along with their six-year-old daughter.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/404853055?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=fanciful_writes
          
          

Hi, it's Bahaar. Can you please give my book a try.