emperordragon39
Hey dude, I have a tip to help you improve your twin star exorcist story if you want to hear it.
emperordragon39
@emperordragon39 it's fine. Anyways I think you need more detail because in the beginning all you have is dialogue; without really any details. My advice is to add more details and don't just use dialogue.
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jzizawzm
@emperordragon39 , i would love to hear your recommendation to improve the story , i don't get a lot of time nowadays so sorry if i've responded late .
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