Kate, AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Here's a tip for the future:
If you want your stories to have cliffhangers, you may want to put chapters into different parts, like in your case...
Prologue: Part 1
Chapter 1: Part 2
Chapter 2: Part 3
And so on..............
This keeps the reader on the edge of their seats. Shock them with a cliffhanger full of suspense and anticipation. Make them want to go to the next scene/chapter.
Just a tip.........
See you later! Bii!
@CoolMickeyM2704