CoolMIckeyM2704

Kate, AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
          Here's a tip for the future:
          If you want your stories to have cliffhangers, you may want to put chapters into different parts, like in your case...
          Prologue: Part 1
          Chapter 1: Part 2
          Chapter 2: Part 3
          And so on..............
          This keeps the reader on the edge of their seats. Shock them with a cliffhanger full of suspense and anticipation. Make them want to go to the next scene/chapter.
          Just a tip.........
          See you later! Bii!
          @CoolMickeyM2704

CoolMIckeyM2704

Hello Kate!

k4t3m4rt1n

@janee04 Hello, it worked.
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jnaejnaejnae

hello @katem587 I hope it works
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