THENYSHAAAA
Heyyyy author? If you are free can you check out my book?
I REALLY WANT TO HEAR YOUR OPINION!
love you:)
k_1827
I read the chapters which you have posted so far. For Jay, it's better for her to heal as of now. In my opinion, there's no need for her to go to Keifer's birthday party because he did wrong with her. Also, it's better for Jay to live peacefully rather than reconciling with the Fernandez family. Besides, don't add any girl clinging or kissing Keifer because most of the fanfictions on Wattpad have the same story plot which I really don't like at all. As far as it's about forgiving Keifer or Fernandez family, especially her mother, Jay shouldn't forgot them easily because there's no justification for slapping her multiple time even after knowing that she is suffering from a trauma. So, in my opinion, it would be better if Jay would focus on herself rather than constantly thinking about Fernandez family, Keifer, and rest of section-e.
But, whatever I have said is my opinion. It's totally upto you whether you want to add something like this or not.
Thankyou!!!✨
~K.
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