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Please continue Aro's Mate its Awesome as writers there's always criticism. True Alec and Jane are Bio twins but you can play it off meaning the cheating was a break up of Twin bond hold a trial once she's Queen and all is forgiven. If in this story Alice's Mate ends up being the evil spy for Eddie boy then there's a good storyline. Too because all Hell can then break loose bringing out Jaspers Alter Ego  the Major god of war wanting to protect the true Queen of the Vamps Taking over as Head guard for her protection. True Marcus seems to take a Fatherly role Caius prob should be more brother Uncle to the New baby Princess He has yet to see her and Janey can be besties With the Queen and Confidant as can Renata and Heidi. They will love the bundle of sunshine. As for Eddie hmm he and Alice could really be manipulative the golden kids of Carlisle a bummer I mean he's in or being manipulative he knows the Laws and was a fourth Volturi Lord the one with the vision and wishing peace even if he gets put on trial for Ed's and Alice's Issues Aro and Queen Bella can see how they too were used by the golden duo and granted pardence. Then can once more come home. Alec i feel was used by Alice way low blow there. Jasper can flip when he finds out and Jasper n Carlisle's Alter Egos can dispose of the duo to make peace. Jasper being Military hell I'd say after proving such loyalty can then realise his Mates the Little Princess Lol. Either way Please Update soon you have Great Detail and skill and theres soooo many ways this story can go! Keep Writing and Update soon! Great vision!!!!