@ CarlosSmith318 the story can have more plot in it and try to introduce the girl slowly or make some flascback
Like
Prouloge
Bio
Chapter 1: broken dreams
Chapter 2: the hope from shadows
Chapter 3: run away and KARMA
Chapter 4: training arc and meeting a old
friend
Chapter 5: Reunion
Chapter 6: entrance exam
Chapter 7 and soo on
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