kaiiiyttk
Party next door is to funny bro
kaiiiyttk
kaiiiyttk
I’m gonna take a min off Wattpad
lttlilly
Hi dear! I'm so sorry. I hate doing spam but i started writing a dark romance about mafia. if you stop by and give me your opinion I would be very happy! otherwise it doesn't matter thanks anyway❤️❤️
I hope you have a nice one❤️
lttlilly
Thank you so much! don't worry i love feedback! really write to me, i'm trying to improve and you're already helping me. it's the first time i write with this type of narration, i hoped it would help me to put the feelings of all the characters. maybe going forward with the chapters or i change the narration or i try to insert the feelings better, almost as if it were a mix between pov and third person. what do you think?