ITS SOOO GOODD I LOVE IT all i could really say is the layout like most stories i’ve read are from left to right and it’s easier to read like that but i’m happy to read in the middle aswell it just might be more convenient for other readers if it was from left to right but other than that you’re a natural writer
@kaisersprettyslut EXACLTYY KAISER’S OTHER INTENTION WAS PROBABLT TO HELP NESS BECOME A BETTER PLAYER?? LIKE THEIR NOT GONNA BE TOGETHER FOREVEER LIKE NESS IS A BIT TOO DEPENDENT ON NESS BUT NESS NEVER SHOWED HE DIDNT LIKEBIT OR HAD A OROBLEM SO HOW WOULDNKAISER KNOW IT WAS WRONG☹️☹️
YESS HES CHILDISH BUR WE LOVE HIM FOR THATTTSTOPP AND HES HE JS NEEDS MOTHERLY LOVE KIND OF. SINCE HIS LEft HIM. RIGHTT like they make gim such a character like that BUT THEY ASSUJE THAT BC HES COKCY OR WHATEVER LIKE IK HES CONTROLLING TO NESS AND DOMINANT YEa (we like that though) BUT POSSESSIVE! NO HE DIDNT WANT NESS BECAUSE NESS WAS TOO DEPENDENT ON HIM AND HAD NO ‘INDIVIDUAK TAALENT I. KAISERS EYES’ BUT HELLOO?
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