kamal yandluri

Hi there, sorry to bother you but I would really appreciate if you take a look at my book. This is my first attempt at writing I'll appreciate all honest reviews. Have a good day :)

I just published my next part of the episode one.
          With that the episode one is complete.
          
          Reread the part "The main character MC"
          Where I added a part continuing the main story.
          
          I'll be continuing the story after a small break.
          Until then, I'll be publishing a, other few script drafts.
          
          Witness me as I get better with the writing.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/199007600

I just published my next part of the episode one. Please read it and comment on below.
          Witness me as I get better in writing.