Hi, I really like your book so far, I'm not finished yet, but I want to tell you what I think. I think it's going well, and the relationship between Kody and Violet is building well, but some of the grammar markings sort of take away from the story. I know it's really annoying when people say "EDIT IT!" Seeing as I have a story myself, but I just wanted to tell you.
Best Wishes, @likethecheese