kankowskibot

Hey i have uploaded the next two chapters of 'The creases of the universe' and i was wondering if you could check out my story and tell me what you think? http://www.wattpad.com/16154414-the-creases-of-the-universe 
          	

kankowskibot

@Party_Popcorn ooh, can you look over my two stories then? they aren't much but i really want to make them as good as they can be before uploading more...and i have no idea how to make them better (help!?!?),...can you spread the word to other people too? it would be much appreciated and i can look over some of your stuff too if tyou would like?xo