I can’t talk much since I can’t write well at all. Though I will say I loved the romance portion for the story so far which I thought was surprisingly well done. I also thought it would be good to have a at least a sentence or two to describe what the mc (Wanderer) is wearing. Since I found it hard to know when he was wearing something like his hat. Overall though this story is great, I have little standout thoughts on what could have been done better.