kanlvsuu
if anyone sees this, please provide me with any feedback or tips to become a better writer! thank you~
kanlvsuu
thank you so much! it will take a long time for me to eventually get back to this book– i'm on a temporary hiatus since i need to focus on school a lot more now lolol. I don't know when I'll start writing again but do know that I am active on Wattpad regularly!!
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Ant0901
I can’t talk much since I can’t write well at all. Though I will say I loved the romance portion for the story so far which I thought was surprisingly well done. I also thought it would be good to have a at least a sentence or two to describe what the mc (Wanderer) is wearing. Since I found it hard to know when he was wearing something like his hat. Overall though this story is great, I have little standout thoughts on what could have been done better.
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