YoungAtlas-101

Hey.
          I am a new writer, and I would live to have some input and advice on my recently updated book.
          Please feel free to vote, comment, and follow me. All support is greatly appreciated! 
          Please share, and I hope you enjoy!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/338262918?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=YoungAtlas-101&wp_originator=98meQ2WxVvlSqLIc%2F8f8LESIKerqMMb8jyDfOYgz6XjTsT66L2h7XnOT871mWgoy%2Bu3Ezh6%2FoARXfg8RmJQWI4OLLBQx8Jm4m23cXIV6yETE9%2FJbw6VvhD2DLI9vPf2k