Kanzi

How am I writing, my stry good/amazing/keep it up/nice/ok. 
          
          Answer honestly to make my stry mre better. 
          

U make grammatical mistakes free and use difficult or fancy words to increase ur story quality 
          
          -don t mind pls. 

Mine one is 'The mountain '

But what's the next episode you going to post

Ok ok

That one ,found help for stupid project 

Posted on 12:10

Hey l didn't get ur snt message

Hey, I like your story which is much better than your previous one, but there are still some noticeable or major mistakes {minor mistakes too (which should not be done in English)} otherwise the rest is very good.  I personally liked your used new difficult words which will help your story look more attractive and will definitely help you grow too far, maybe BEYOND YOUR IMAGINATION