Just read _Tale of Eternal Aeloria_ chapter 1. Excellent writing and presentation, especially in the SPaG (Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar) department that you worried about in your Profile's About section.
However, the actual About section text could be improved. It would be extremely rude and presumptuous of me to write it without your consent, so I offer the opportunity, but have no expectations of a response. I'll be regularly reading one or two chapters of your _Aeloria_ until I get caught up.
Do you post to a schedule? If so, it might be beneficial to say so in the book's summary. Your fic, your choice, as always.