kara_ki_ri
Hello everyone,
Updated the edited version of chapter 1 link below
https://my.w.tt/pp1802X4Abb
Will be waiting for your critics on the following. Hopefully it's better and more interesting than the previous version. I haven't changed all the dialogues just added a few words here and there or combined a few.
And thanks for showering all your love on the introduction chapter
Will be attaching the link of the introduction chapter below for everyone
https://my.w.tt/sbmIYRf5Abb
Love you all ❤️