Hey sweetie thanks for fanning/friending me. Just kno that for your first attemp at writing you are doing really well. It's great that you are using Microsoft word. It is a awesome program to help with grammer as well as spelling. It seems that the more I write the more I learn, so be patient, and don't give up. If your patient enough to read, reread, revise, reread and revise again lol you will be fine. I am really interested in where you're going to take this story and I will be happy to help as much as possible. I don't know WHAT i would do without the comments and suggestions from all of you! Sometimes it just takes a second pair of eyes to catch something. Rambling again... Ok enough...talk to you soon!