itsnotzaahhh

Heyyy<3
          
          I am writing a book called promises and I'm kind of new to this writing thing and I've only posted one chapter  so would you take a look at my book and tell me if it's missing something and if I need to add something to it and all and whta you feel about my writting if it's terrible could you pleaseee pleaseee held me to improve it as I really enjoyed writting the first chapter and i am a bit excited. . .  So if you do have the time will you please check it out will you
          
          Thank you for your time<3