The book so far is very fast it see
Mm that you need more time to develop the. Situation you feel rushed when you read it, not a criticism But a spoke thing to consider time to develop the story slow down but you have a good way of presenting the story, good luck,
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The Push Maze
A thrilling book about a mysterious maze, and a boys quest to find the answer.
