Bethany

oh my god update ur story please xx

Finally uploaded to Devil Himself! Only been like a year... But I promise I'm back and I'll upload more frequently!

Thanks for the follow! (:

Hi! Thanks so much for following me and for adding "Blood Pet" to your library! Glad you like it! Lol... sorry that you stayed up until four AM to read it though; I hope you weren't too tired because of that! :)

I saw your thread and please can I have a little bit of all three critiques. I cant leave a link because of the wattpad problem but if it would be okay could you please critique simply endless. 

Hi!
          I'd like an overall review!
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/4198477-the-14th

..really like the titles you chose for your books, they draw you in!

I'd like if you wanted to critique my story, it's a fanfic though, but I hope you like it anyway. Read the whole thing before you critique, it's easier http://www.wattpad.com/story/4221925-changes-in-life-a-niall-horan-one-direction-fanfic

Hey, I'd love to get a brutal critique from you. My story is Lohikäärme. It's a fantasy story, and I really want to know if I'm doing things right.
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/2257590-lohik%C3%A4%C3%A4rme
          
          Thanks! :)

Could you please brutally critique my stories Scream Inc. ( http://www.wattpad.com/story/4294863-scream-inc ) and Yakuza Restart ( http://www.wattpad.com/story/2223889-yakuza-restart-manga-screenplay-style ) please. Scream inc. has only a prologue and Yakuza Restart only have 2 chapters.