kaseyjapan223

@TerryP 
          	Kanako is okay, I guess. I'm not that traditional anyways.

TerryP

@kaseyjapan223   Hi. Kanako.  I have left you some NaNo mail to be read.  It's been about 4 months.  I am wondering how you are these days and if you are doing to finish your story.
          
          If you still want me to work with you, will you please wait until after November?
          
          I hope school and you are continuing to do well at the International School.
          
          See you.

TerryP

Hi again, Kanako. I'm having trouble reading your whole story and voting for your chapters.  Your story is easy to follow and your story flows in a delightful way.  I'll share a couple of things in a private message.  I am enjoying your story.

TerryP

Thanks for getting back with me.
          
          Traditionally we Americans use our first names socially and for business. However I use my middle name Terry socially.
          
          I look forward to reading your story.  Since you have grown up in a culture different from my own, it should be interesting to see how you handle your plot and express yourself.
          
          Good lukic and enjoy your time here on Wattpad.   

TerryP

I believe Japanese tradition calls for the family name first.  So is your name Tsutsumi?   Writing is a craft.  I presume that English is not your first language.   So read good literature in English.  Do not attempt to imitate older classics such as the Bronte sisters, or anything written before a hundred years ago.  I have seen movies filmed in Japan.  Japanese know how to put a story together just as well.  Only some things in your culture will not move others here in the USA.  But take heart.  Write me specific questions if you wish. It's good to have you on Wattpad.