Hey, I saw a bit was going on, and wanted to tell you something - without giving you the feeling of harrisment. Please excuse my grammar. I am not a native speaker. Well, in my home language, German, I am a bit like you. I hate grammar mistakes. They annoy me. But still, if I know, that someone is maybe struggling with dyslexia or is just not that good with grammar, I let them. It's not my intention to tell you, how you should be. I am not your mother or father, man, I don't even know you. How you going to be depends on your own decision. Criticism is always helpful and good, but it can be even more powerful when used in a bad way. It can hurt people, you know. Now imagine that your heart always blooms when seeing a new vote, that someone liked your story. A nice comment. A flutter in your heart. More courage to write. A good critizing comment, tells you, what to do better. But, without a reason and no example how to do better, they can be mean. A crack. A stab into the heart, or ego, whatever you want to call it. Story is discontinued. Lastly updated, five months ago. Author dissappeared. Maybe I am a bit too dramatic in here, but please, always remind yourself: Your and our, everybodys actions have consequences.