kasipok4

Ended up keeping my Wattpad for now cause I can sign in using Google and I'm an idiot. Got a laptop instead of desktop because my mom's a bitch. High school started and my schedule is decent I guess.. First period supposed to be Latin 2 but ended up Latin 1/2, Second period History, Third period English, Fourth period Robotics, Fifth period Earth and Space Science, Sixth period Chemistry and Seventh period Geometry.
          	
          	Got my hair dyed and it's already fading. I quit my job because my boss only contacted me once a week and I barely got any requests sooo....  Yep... 
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          	SOMEONE.
          	
          	
          	
          	ANYONE.
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	Write a more than decent Masaomi Asahina x reader.
          	
          	
          	
          	PLEASE. 
          	
          	
          	Or tell me about an existing one.
          	
          	
          	Preferably a nice long book (not of oneshots) where Ema has a younger sister (the reader) wo moves in later on and over time gets with Masaomi. If not then just something where the reader and Masa end up together... Some lemons and limes if possible!! PLEASE.

kasipok4

Ended up keeping my Wattpad for now cause I can sign in using Google and I'm an idiot. Got a laptop instead of desktop because my mom's a bitch. High school started and my schedule is decent I guess.. First period supposed to be Latin 2 but ended up Latin 1/2, Second period History, Third period English, Fourth period Robotics, Fifth period Earth and Space Science, Sixth period Chemistry and Seventh period Geometry.
          
          Got my hair dyed and it's already fading. I quit my job because my boss only contacted me once a week and I barely got any requests sooo....  Yep... 
          Also...
          
          
          SOMEONE.
          
          
          
          ANYONE.
          
          
          
          
          
          Write a more than decent Masaomi Asahina x reader.
          
          
          
          PLEASE. 
          
          
          Or tell me about an existing one.
          
          
          Preferably a nice long book (not of oneshots) where Ema has a younger sister (the reader) wo moves in later on and over time gets with Masaomi. If not then just something where the reader and Masa end up together... Some lemons and limes if possible!! PLEASE.

Wesen_des_Lichts

Hey, I saw a bit was going on, and wanted to tell you something - without giving you the feeling of harrisment. Please excuse my grammar. I am not a native speaker. Well, in my home language, German, I am a bit like you. I hate grammar mistakes. They annoy me. But still, if I know, that someone is maybe struggling with dyslexia or is just not that good with grammar, I let them. It's not my intention to tell you, how you should be. I am not your mother or father, man, I don't even know you. How you going to be depends on your own decision. Criticism is always helpful and good, but it can be even more powerful when used in a bad way. It can hurt people, you know. Now imagine that your heart always blooms when seeing a new vote, that someone liked your story. A nice comment. A flutter in your heart. More courage to write. A good critizing comment, tells you, what to do better. But, without a reason and no example how to do better, they can be mean. A crack. A stab into the heart, or ego, whatever you want to call it. Story is discontinued. Lastly updated, five months ago. Author dissappeared. Maybe I am a bit too dramatic in here, but please, always remind yourself: Your and our, everybodys actions have consequences. 

kasipok4

@Wesen_des_Lichts 
            Thank you for not "fighting fire with fire" or being a rude prick.
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kasipok4

@Wesen_des_Lichts 
            I'm a logical thinker above all else and don't really connect to or empathize with others when it comes to using emotions or feeling so I can't necessarily say I would feel anything if I read a good or bad comment, let alone get a "like" or "vote" on any stories. 
            Yes, thinking about it, I realize harsh criticism can be bad for others and it can lead to people doing things like not writing anymore, but I also think that those people who do quit have no right to continue in the first place. If they quit because one person says something mean then it's not the right thing for them to be doing. They're not passionate enough about it and not strong enough to continue doing it.
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kasipok4

Lot's of things going on - most good. 
          
          I'll be getting a desktop soon so I'll be turning my MacBook Air into the school until next year. 
          When schools starts again I'll be taking college classes as well as my normal high school classes. 
          In a month's time I'll be getting my hair dyed to that of an optical illusion. 
          I've also gotten an all in one printer, scanner, and copier. I have a job offer at a company called Zion Free Media as an artist and that's what I'll be using it for. 
          
          And last but surely not least - I have forgotten my Wattpad password! :D 
          I'll be creating a new account and once I have I'll be starting a new book. I'd like it if you guys would give feedback - both kind and not. The new account user and such hasn't been decided, but once it has I'll let you all know. Thank you.

luna8moon7

Hello again I'm glad I didn't make you made, I'm happy that your happy. I hope soon that we can forget about this drama and they can realize that your trying to help.
          :) 

kasipok4

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@potatosandstuff         I'm not being an asshole. This is how I give criticism. If people don't like it they can easily ignore it. I will not take a step back to think about anything. The stronger a person is the less it bothers them, and if they decide to start an internet war over it then that just shows you how far in life they'll get.
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potatosandstuff

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@kasipok4
            You're not helping, you're just being an asshole. There's a reason people are telling you to stop. I tend to give helpful criticism on what I'm reading and not a soul has told me to stop. They've all thanked me. You need to take a step back and think about what you're saying. People like you destroy other people's motivation. If you want to be an asshole come shit on my work. I dare you to try to offend me. I fucking dare you.
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kasipok4

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@luna8moon7 
            That's ok. I'm just happy you're happy that I'm happy and that you didn't send shit telling me to stop. :)
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luna8moon7

Hi I came to talk about the things you said on other people's books. Now I understand that you criticize people to help them improve but not everyone works like that. I'm not good at spelling ( i hate it )and if someone were to criticized me on it I would hate it even more and feel like I was awful at any story I write. I don't want to start a war I just want you to know you can help people in many other ways beside criticizing them. I'm sorry if I made you mad, my apologies, but I really want to say this
          
          And I'm sorry for all the hate the others are sending you. We shouldn't fight fire with fire. I'm disappointed that they think that just because you said something rude to them, they can call you rude things back.

kasipok4

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@luna8moon7 
            It's been proven that most people, in fact, almost no one learns unless you give them harsh judgement. It's to bad they never listen and instead start an online war rather than trying to improve themselves into better human beings... I'm grateful to you in knowing that you're not gonna start a war or send any shit telling me to stop, you don't need to apologize for other people they should do it themselves... I'm also grateful that you aren't gonna send rude shit to me because of a war started by DeepLightning over some criticism..... I know there are other ways to help people but unless I give harsh criticism to the dumb ones no one's gonna listen or pay any attention. You didn't make me mad or anything if anything I'm happy. When I first saw in my notifications that you posted to my feed I was feeling pissed thinking someone else was sending a bunch of fucked up crap without grammar but then I read this and was grateful it wasn't. Thank you for that. Just because you didn't send anything rude I will tone it down a little bit with the rude comments but I will still criticize people that are bad and use harsh judgement. 
            
            I hope to talk to you again soon.
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cursedfics69

Hello,I've seen your "constructive criticism" on other's stories.Please do me a favor and stop.It's annoying and your grammar is no better than their's.This app was made for everyone to write stories,no matter how good or bad.Please just stop being a downright àsshole.

kasipok4

@MoonTehSloth 
            I'm in tenth now and just realized a mistake. I used the correct 'you're' originally.
            
            You're is you are. 
            Your is not.
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kasipok4

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@hberkovic03     If there were an option to edit it then I would have done so a while ago....  Thank you for not being a bitch, ass, jerk, bastard, or rude person in general. :)
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MoonTehSloth

@kasipok ... wrong your. It's your, not you're. Sorry bout dis correction :3 I mean nothing about it
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IMTOCOOL111

I'm not picking sides...but just ranting on this person's page is not helping anything.

kasipok4

@IMTOCOOL111 
            @ZeroIntolerance No you're grammar is pretty bad....
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ZeroIntolerance

I wasn't ranting , I was trying to help so it didn't get any worse. But I get told that I have bad grammar... My grammar is wonderful thank you.
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GhostNinjaWrayth

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What's up "Lil Bitch"? Indeed, your name seems to fit you and your moral integrity quite well. 
          
          I've just seen DeepLightning's mention of you, and I, being my "ever-so-kind" (notice my sarcasm) self have decided to bring a few things to your attention.
          
          I notice how you criticize people for their "bad" grammar and stories. Pointing out these mistakes is indeed a nice thing to do so the author can correct the mistakes. The way you decide to go about this, however, can be described best in one word: Bitchy.
          
          You seem to have no boundaries as to rudeness, which completely contradicts the idea of "constructive criticism."
          
          You also make rude remarks on people's grammar. This is what I find the most intriguing. You see, I've read some of the things you've wrote. You have far worse grammar than any of those you criticize, and so the fact that you criticize them anyway makes you a hypocrite.
          
          Trust me, you will never be popular on this website if you are a hypocrite.
          
          To conclude my "mini-rant" so to speak: You are a bitch, a hypocrite, and overall, an asshole. 
          
          Oh, and feel free to read some of my recent Oneshots. I'd be just /honored/ of you'd give me some of your so called "constructive criticism."
          
          All it will do is get you blocked and reported, after all. ;)

kasipok4

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@GhostNinjaWrayth 
            
            I missed this I don't know how many times... 
            
            "I attempted to sort things out rationally while still offering my own opinions, but it seems "rationality" is not something you're familiar with, nor a part of your vocabulary. Oh, well. I tried."
            
            In my opinion, the shit you wrote was not you sorting anything out rationally....        :|
            
            You're opinion seems and is extremely biased. You're simply talking about me and it appears you haven't even bothered trying to hear both sides of the story. :l    You read DeepLightnings shit and sided with them instantaneously. Do me a favor. 
            
            
            Go fuck yourself in the ass with a cucumber until you're willing to hear/read everyone's opinion of the same incident.
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kasipok4

@GhostNinjaWrayth        I don't actually hope it helps them tbh. :l 
            I kind of just want the wannabes to leave and the people who can actually write to stay.   I will continue to criticize people no matter what anyone says, and I don't care if people decide to start or join in on any internet wars. I would just rather it be the people who are smart and not idiotic ass holes that feel bad about themselves after reading what I have to say.
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kasipok4

@GhostNinjaWrayth 
            I did try to explain. I told him/her about how I criticise those I see potential in and she/he ended up sending a message to my inbox telling me that I shouldn't be criticizing others because I'm not very good at writing myself or something like that.
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kasipok4

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@ChineseDragon101 
          I don't act like a bitch about a few small errors I act like a bitch when the author ruins the entire book. If someone makes a few minor errors I will tell them without doing whatever the fuck your accusing me of. DeepLightning had a book of errors so I told her/him about he/she made it into a war so don't come onto me about it.

Jade2698

Try pausing attention in class and backing up your statements please. Your like a dog all bark and no bite. Before bashing others look at your own work.

kasipok4

@Jade2698 
            It is a true statement that I'm still re-writing it over and over again til I'm both done and satisfied with the first chapter, so if it's coherent then tell me what I need to fix because that was the point in posting before it was finished... I will be adding details over time because like I said up above I'm still writing. I don't give a damn about adding a prologue because that just spoils the story....
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Jade2698

And I suck at spelling yet my story isn't affected by it because I review it constantly and fix errors that I find in the original copy
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Jade2698

My story is no where near finished because I'm still writing it and just because you clear where your background is going to be doesn't excuse your lack of detail and coherent story line even if it is just one chapter I have a prologue to start it out instead of just jumping in said story
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