@kasulature
Hello, anyone who is listening! I am collaborating with the awesome @PunyaorAnya :D Please check out the story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/44794704-institution It's called Institution for now and it is going to be a combination of fantasy and teen fiction :) Please let us know your thoughts.
Going offline for a few months again T.T Goodbye, newly-found books and writers :'l
thanks for following back! I see you're a fellow George R. R. Martin fan!
Hey! I didn't know "perks of being a wallflower" is one of your favourite books. I like it too. Charlie is a interesting character. (:
My new story RUST is now up :D
@kasulature I just read it. I can't post comments for some reason, but here are my thoughts. Amazing... Beautifully written, and captivating from the first few sentences. I literally could not do anything before I finished. (I had to hold back a sneeze to refrain from pausing!) There were a few grammatical errors I noticed, but it was mainly very nice grammar wise. I will always suggest this for all kinds of people, but try to use more interesting choices of words. In one part you said that the floor "cracked".... Next time you might try "ruptured" or "fractured" perhaps. Very good anyway, and I'm very interested to learn more about these characters.
Are you using a phone? Because I cannot comment or vote from my phone anymore.. :/
And OMG thank you!!! :DD Can you please tell me what the errors were, so I can correct them? And yeah.. that was a weird part... I didn't want to write 'cracked' but I couldn't think of anything :p
Don't worry, I'm never disappointed... Unless there's something really really disappointing.
I hope you aren't disappointed then :) cause that would mean it's really really bad. Be honest even if you dont like it though..
I can't wait for whatever you're about to share!
:P no problem
I am so honored to see my story on someone else's page. Thank you!