Felm21

Hey Author, you are incredibly talented in your writing and wise. However, I feel as though there is too much happening at once book 2 focuses on Dominic when Amara and Alex’s story has barely been explored. Please make a streamlined plot and multiple books can come from that eventually ☺️

katanya7804

Aw, thank you so much! And thank you for being honest with me. I really appreciate the feedback, especially because I actually understand where you’re coming from.
            
            I’m honestly just learning as I go. I’m not a seasoned author or anything close to it. This is only my second book, and I literally started writing these stories for fun. So sometimes I probably get a little too excited and try to put everything into one story.
            
            And I agree that there is a lot happening in Book Two. I have so many characters and storylines that I want to explore that I probably did bite off more than I needed to. I’ll definitely take what you said into consideration and see what I can do to streamline things without losing the story.
            
            And who knows? Maybe some of these storylines really will become their own books eventually.
            
            Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to give me your thoughts. I genuinely appreciate it. ❤️
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lovelost78

Hey I'm new to your page and I just like to say I'm enjoying the first story and I can't wait to read part 2 

DarleneJacckson642

@lovelost78 l love your stories iam though 1 and 2 iam wait for 3 
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katanya7804

Thank you so much…..It’s my first story and I’m no expert but I’m glad you are enjoying it. 
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