katefreling

Chapter will be posted tomorrow :)

neehhari

Hi everyone! I’m sharing my story called Hidden Hearts, Hidden Truths. It’s a mix of one-sided love, mystery, romance, friendship, family, and young love. The story is different from the usual mafia stories and has its own unique twists and emotions.
          I hope you all enjoy reading it! If you do read it, please let me know in the comments how you feel about the story. Your feedback would mean a lot to me
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410790520?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=neehhari

Cakie009

I enjoyed Hookup protocol it was witty, ending fell into similar trap like most, repeating things and plothole mortgage repayment. I was looking forward to scene Noah explaining first time they met, he did not think she was a prostitute and his intentions at the time. 
          
          I would be happy to support your work buying first book in the series from Amazon, unfortunately Wattpad overprices coins and downwards spiral with ads isn’t a business I want to pay into.
          
          You’ve made fast work in 3 years, I look forward to your future works.

katefreling

@Cakie009 Thank you so much for this comment, I truly appreciate your advice and I completely agree, I trailed off on the ending and would re-work it before launching on Amazon or elsewhere. The stories on here are all first drafts, and comments like yours really help me see what I can improve or do better moving forwards. No worries on not wanting to buy on here, I completely understand and don't blame you. Thanks again for taking the time to give me your feedback. 
            -kate <3
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