katefreling

Chapter will be posted tomorrow :)

yourmysterywriter09

Love your book . Literally bought Business arrangement. So…just signed up for the ONC and I made it to round two. Yay me buh I need support as in more readers and I’m stuck with 35 so help a girl out.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/407688163?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=yourmysterywriter09

Cakie009

I enjoyed Hookup protocol it was witty, ending fell into similar trap like most, repeating things and plothole mortgage repayment. I was looking forward to scene Noah explaining first time they met, he did not think she was a prostitute and his intentions at the time. 
          
          I would be happy to support your work buying first book in the series from Amazon, unfortunately Wattpad overprices coins and downwards spiral with ads isn’t a business I want to pay into.
          
          You’ve made fast work in 3 years, I look forward to your future works.

katefreling

@Cakie009 Thank you so much for this comment, I truly appreciate your advice and I completely agree, I trailed off on the ending and would re-work it before launching on Amazon or elsewhere. The stories on here are all first drafts, and comments like yours really help me see what I can improve or do better moving forwards. No worries on not wanting to buy on here, I completely understand and don't blame you. Thanks again for taking the time to give me your feedback. 
            -kate <3
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