Grisha2610
Hey, just wanted to tell you that I like how much depth you are giving to the characters in the book (especially Arthur). I would just suggest to cut down on some exposition with George in the eighteenth chapter. Otherwise good job!
katherine-wilde
@Grisha2610 thank you so much! That's so nice of you to say. I'm hoping to edit the last few chapters I've released soon, so I'll be sure to keep that in mind (I'll definitely need to cut it down though :) )
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