katie

 my story is here:
          
          www.wattpad.com/1534695-question-everything-no-exeptions 
          
          can u please critique this? thanks :)

Just letting you I sent my story to your email  Of Earth and Eil to your email 

Hey, would you possibly be able to critique my story? http://www.wattpad.com/1444884-story-of-my-life
          If you have time this would be great :) thanks

Hope you'll drop by my book soon. Thanks so much. And when you do, I hope that it won't bore you! :D

Would appreciate it if you would critique my story for me. It isn't very long yet but I'm still writing. http://www.wattpad.com/1494147-diary-of-a-forgotten-teen. Thanks a lot.

Hey I would really appreciate it if you would edit my story "My Life Now" thank you in advance fi xxxx
          

hey peeps im really bored during summer cause i have to babysit instead of having a real life cause aparently according to all my neighbors and family im so great with kids so they SOULD BE  my life . of course after that they decided that im the new daycare center and now i watch up to 20 kids a day yes 20 and their ages are from 2months-11yr. olds .and so now i just put each age group in a room give them walkie talkies so they can talk to me and relax on my couch that is ultil that babys and todlers decide they have to potty or their hungry, but atleast i get paid 25 bucks a week per kid whick means i get anywhere from $125 - $500 
          
          
          
          
          
          but anyway ive started to critique,edit and improve writing so if you need my aid message me 
          
          
          
          tooodles

I'm thinking more on the line of tommorrow. It's like 10 pages.. I know it sounds like lot...If you interested I guess emailing is the best option. I use Microsoft word so I hope that is not  problem.

Hello thanks for commenting on my story i really appreciate the advice and im going to try and improve and yeah i would like to work with you if you like :!