Katie Rodante

Thanks for following ❤️

Hy, if you have some spare time can read this and give your feedback I would love to read.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376562287?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=kiapoetry_

I liked the changes to the story that you made in Thorn. Having Embla sick is a great way of establishing stakes and giving Prue agency. The setting sounded interesting, solid names. The voice was a little sparse for me, but by no means bad. I would've preferred more figurative language.
          
          The dialogue between Prue and Embla was great. I liked the back and forth and it felt authentic to that kind of experience. Prue's frustration is honest, Embla's desire for control is on display and that feels right for a family.
          
          I wish I had the funds to check the book out in its entirety. What are you working on right now?

Thanks for listing my story! I hope you like it if you get around to it ❤️