siyadhyawrites
Um I am not so good with words author but I am totally excited to say some things that took my heart here in this story. No doubt your writing style is good but now I won't say about your writing, I would like to point out few things which I loved the most though no doubt I loved the whole story but just some points I want to mention-
1. At the starting you took my heart when she returned from Chicago and entered the house, Paati and her Amma- I loved that you did not make them unnecessarily rude or gave them a patriarchal mindset. I was convinced you can say 30%
2. Then comes K's behaviour, she did not try hard to show that she supports feminism and the respect she has for her ladies I love that.
3. I loved when you saw the disadvantages too of borning in an Indian family but again at last all is well so no unnecessary toxicity.
4. Right amount of drama. Tbh I don't like much when a topic is too much stretched, I loved how you solved Noah's character easily, in fact in reality there is nothing like obsession that most stories nowadays show. This story mostly depends on reality so I very much liked it.
5. You showed the complexities of emotions quite well.
6. The story length is perfect. Perfect because I believe in quality not quantity and this story has everything and does not have which is unnecessary.
katietripps
@siyadhyawrites Thank you so so much for your kind words!! It means so much to me that you enjoyed the story so much. I really loved reading all your comments, they made my day!! :) Kavya and Arjun's story is very close to my heart, so I'm very happy that you could appreciate it as well! I have started working on Sahana and Sid's story too! Would love for you to read it and tell me what you think once I share it :)
siyadhyawrites
@siyadhyawrites CONTINUATION - 7. Finally the characters oh god my fav point tbh, you did not make Noah's character a villain which also took my heart cause some people are immature but they do know the situation in reality so it was so mature of you to not cmake him a villain just for mere drama. And sid and sahana the perfect combo of chemistry looking forward for their story. And at last but not the least Arjun's character, tbh a man like him do exist yep and thank you for keeping him normal, normal in the sense nowadays stories have that obsessed male who would kiss the feet and bleh bleh but you showed that real love comes through effort, showing up and being an unbreakable wall between problems and ur partner. so Arjun's character felt real; and last Kavya oh god, she represents me and I am sure most of the Indian girls how she in frustration also did not disrespect the elders and I know she was complex but who isn't right? and especially trusting after everything was also not easy so her character though had flaws but she was messily perfect. Now this is a story which deserves to be famous, a good balance of emotions, drama and complexities. I really wish and hope that this become famous. Thank you