@katzun Oh, I definitely agree with you! I remember having to write five essays back in November, and my English teacher this past year was no help at all. I somehow learned more about grammar in my French class than English. Nevertheless, I love reading your story, Kat! It's very interesting, and your characters have adorable personalities. I'm glad to help you out on some of the details, and it's great to help out other writers become better and better!