-ltaeyong

I've read your book. You should add in more words, example instead of what you are writing now, write above 1000 words. 
          
          Do not rush on your book, instead take your time to write it. If you have more time, you more time, edit the typos you've made it. 
          
          For dialogs, every one of it, put spacing. Don't cluster it all together because it will look messy. 
          
          Also, don't make your book go too fast. Slow down a little and make readers feel excited to read your book! 
          
          Thats all. (-:

-ltaeyong

@pr1ncessjungkook you should*
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