@linahanson @kayra2816 Only got to this after some monstrous scrolling. Yay, I love nothing more than people telling me they love my books. I will have a look at Lumira - third person is actually quite well used - is the other one in first person? Don't worry I will find it. I have a list of novels on my critique list so might tak a bit of time - if I do not turn up reasonably soonish do poke me. It's getting very hard to work, read, critique - and write. :( I love it but I get distracted sometimes.
Anyway thanks again for this vote storm!!!