kayyemmx

@musikjunkie loll. i so wanted to do that like all my life. have a patchy patterned cat, call him patch, have smokey my cat, and another called stripes!!! :)
          	waheyyy!! :)

AlohaBloo

All right read your story so far so good storyline wise (: I seriously want to know what happens next so upload soon! All right opinion time!
          1) You should make the chapters a little longer at least 2 pages is normally a decent amount.
          2) More detail into the story, it is a bit fast paced..but idk why I'm complaining b/c I like it that way..ignore this one haha
          3)It would be REALLY awesome if you could post the links of what the characters look like! I love reading stories where I know chara's appearances.
          4) and lastly I LOVE IT! lol
          Now here is my task for you, CHECK OUT MY STUFF! its poem like writings so its short and sweet, comment your butt off, and plz plz vote and oh idk maybe fan!:D these are essentials on your mission so I am counting on you to pursue it you skywalker. lmao random xD anyway go do your mission and check it out! TEEHEE!
          thanks(:
          -Jayers! 

akima4242564

hi there
          
          I just read your story. I liked it, a realistic love story...
          i commented and voted on both chapters^^ read them, ok?
          my opinion?hmmmmm....it's good, a nice start and I hope it gets interesting soon. try to do some editing and stuff but aside frm that it's well done. 
          
          BTW, I hope that you could give me comments on my story too. If you have time, please read "HACK Paradise: how do you live a life you borrowed?"
          vote if you like it ^^
          
          love
          Akima