Although I was brought up near Toronto in Canada, I've been living back in England for the last ten years.  I've just started writing seriously and would love to know what people think of my first efforts in the realms of the paranormal YA field. 

I wanted to try writing in this genre but didn't want to go for the vampire, werewolf, fairy type thing and so I've chosen an old tale from Greek Mythology I remember from Univeristy as my starting point.  
This is the first in a number of stories about Eloise and Oliver.  I'll post a chapter every couple of days or part chapters for those that are very long. 
 
Please read and hopefully enjoy.