radicvls

Hey Keane, could I possible ask a favor? Could you please check out my story? It would mean so much,  i've just started it up and i would really love advice for whether im going the right direction or not. it would mean a lot. Thanks!

keaneshine

Oops, I meant "sure."  Typing too fast, LOL!!!
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keaneshine

For sur!  I would love to!
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Sorry, haven't really been supporting your story that much lately. WAY too busy. It's NaNoWriMo or school for me. But I dedicated my first chapter to you haha. I hope that (sorta) makes up for it ;D

keaneshine

I have to admit, you just made my day!  Seriously.  Thank you so much, this means a whole lot!  And don't apologize, we all have so much to do in so little time, I honestly understand :)
            
            Thank you!
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Hey Keane, could I ask you a favor? It would be a awesome if you could leave me some feedback on my NanoWrimo book entry. I'm updating every other day, so you're critiquing would be a HUGE benefit. 
          
          Sorry if I'm sounding too pushy, I just need someone to give me a little push on my writing, that's all. So if you have some time, could you check it out? 
          
          Thanks.

keaneshine

I would love to!  I bet it's pretty awesome, I'll surely check it out.  And you don't sound pushy at all, I understand what you mean!
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