Hey Keane, could I ask you a favor? It would be a awesome if you could leave me some feedback on my NanoWrimo book entry. I'm updating every other day, so you're critiquing would be a HUGE benefit.
Sorry if I'm sounding too pushy, I just need someone to give me a little push on my writing, that's all. So if you have some time, could you check it out?
Thanks.