keewriting

Chapter 17 is up... spooky, sweet, little bit spicy ;)

SirSaint

Hello! I’m the person who posted the reddit thing about reading new stories :D 
          
          Can I just say I’m absolutely in love with the way you write. It’s so detailed but not in an overwhelming way. Your vocabulary is very versatile, consistent and smooth, you use words that make sense in its context. The basics of writing you’ve nailed perfectly and I can vividly imagine what’s going on. 
          
          Your pacing is wonderful. It’s not too fast, not too slow. It’s just right. It gives me time to form opinions about the characters and I look forward to see how much they develop (especially Niko, he’s already my favourite character). 
          
          Content wise, I love how natural everything is. Usually with many LGBTQIA+ books they over-dramatise every small thing because of the ‘oh my goodness I’m gay!’ trope which many people over-exaggerate. You don’t do that which is lovely. The dialogue isn’t cringy and is realistic. Overall I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work, thank you for the recommendation!
          
          There’s nothing to critique really, it’s very well written but if I think of anything, I’ll DM you. 
          Keeping my eye out for further chapters :)
          
          -Saint

keewriting

Wow thank you so much for the kindness and encouragement  I’m glad you’re enjoying it!!
            
            Niko4life
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keewriting

Happy October!! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1139815425?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=keewriting&wp_originator=Atr%2B7qpEXLUA01pAToaH6TgrjquQ0S6rfwDvrNehSwoqeK9DZ%2B8s3OF0QNLgbNmLmMLrX0ZUWpQWLIrK8ezbSKpc6OWMSycJLM72whRp0JroHL9Ic2O7%2FrG54bgapBLP

Cove_Holden

@keewriting Same to you! Sorry, I've been absent for a while. I can't wait to check out your updated chapters!
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keewriting

Latest chapter is here! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1124009366?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=keewriting&wp_originator=ls9cXow3nMk5HGWSbDdEH1ewPTU8BYr99Sn7MpSQaFOHpZjTqbVF%2FbDaI4m9goVV4PG%2FHgjlMSPy2jRaWgYZ0HNcXlJqXV2JbQZ3ZawCM34%2FeOVR7LzhcVUSSWgQInjW

Cove_Holden

@keewriting Ah!! I've been off of wattpad for a bit, but I can't wait to read these!!
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