Published : He placed kisses against my throat , smiling as if he were the devil himself . He chuckled and brushed his rough hand against my skin ,
" I love you ."
First draft : He kiss neck and smile demon . place hand on face and laugh .
" I Loaf you . '
i enjoyed your story so much (NOT IN A SEXUAL WAY THATS DISGUSTING) i really liked how you didn’t romanticize rape and that last chapter, my God. thank you for this masterpiece!
Published : He placed kisses against my throat , smiling as if he were the devil himself . He chuckled and brushed his rough hand against my skin ,
" I love you ."
First draft : He kiss neck and smile demon . place hand on face and laugh .
" I Loaf you . '
Published : He placed kisses against my throat , smiling as if he were the devil himself . He chuckled and brushed his rough hand against my skin ,
" I love you ."
First draft : He kiss neck and smile demon . place hand on face and laugh .
" I Loaf you . '
Published : He placed kisses against my throat , smiling as if he were the devil himself . He chuckled and brushed his rough hand against my skin ,
" I love you ."
First draft : He kiss neck and smile demon . place hand on face and laugh .
" I Loaf you . '