hi all!! so while i’m editing sparky, here’s some basic changes i plan to make that i’d like to point out so no one is confused:
-spaces in between paragraphs and such, it kinda looks sloppy atm
-putting comlink dialogue/starship names/etc. in italics
-minor dialogue changes
-taking out authors notes
-for some reason i really want arlo to have some sort of relationship with r4?? so i’m going to be adding him in to some really minor scenes as well :)
-related to that, possibly adding more small moments with arlo’s friends (still nothing too significant and only for the purpose of elaborating on arlo’s relationships)
-more really super minor stuff!! like super little things about arlo that really aren’t important but are just kinda cute. idk.
i’m almost done editing part 1 and it might take a while to get through the whole thing. obviously i’m not done writing it but i’d like to finish editing the completed and i completed chapters before i release all of it. but if you notice that one chapter looks different than another, that’s why!!