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so, i just read half of your book, i feel like a key to being descriptive is writing in omniscient and it’s a way to get multiple characters emotions in one. another big thing that you made a mistake on is characters saying the same thing in the same paragraph ex: 
          
          “i’m going home.” khai said, “yeah, me too, it’s getting late.” june replied. instead of doing that maybe try, 
          
          “i’m going home.” khai said, looking down at june as she rubbed her lips together and swayed back and forth.
          
          “yeah, me too. it’s getting late.” june replied, watching as khai’s dreads moved with the wind.
          
          

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