Meanbxxxh
Dude I love your book. It’s well balanced on love and drama on this reversed ship. For my personal favorite is that Double d still has his Brian’s and as well bronzes. Which adds a nice flavor to his character ark in this story. While Kevin as a nerd love it. He so different from double d in this story. Which brings me to my second part they both balance out each other in a way to make them more relatable to the readers. But I’m glad you embrace their flaws in a positive manner instead of making them complete Mary Sues. But the way you make the story realist and relatable to the readers at home. The relationship is good balance of fluffy and fulminate of this beloved ship. For that you gave my full respect and appreciation. My only critic is that I wish you go in depth with each character and development them even more. As well maybe even in the near future chapter show the parents perspective of Edward and Kevin relationship. Overall the plot and characters is very entertaining. I can’t wait to see what you create with this story and direction in the future. As you get a 10 out of 10 hellcats.
Keep writing
-mean(｀∀´)Ψ
