First, to write your own profile in 3rd person is not only unusual but makes you seem snobby. Second, I am glad to find a male on here! Third I checked out some of your stuff: not bad, some are pretts good starts, but what now? I cannot really judge from 1 page! I am honest! If you want honest critique from me message me with one story that has more than one page ok?? Maybe you could check out my story and comment - I could need a males oppinion! http://www.wattpad.com/797435-blood-war-slave